Monday, March 14, 2011

Less


Less
Late Evening Entry - March 14, 2011- 

Almost
shuffling
the white haired man
walks past-
on the silent gray
sidewalk.
The story hidden in his black overcoat
folded his shoulders almost to his chest.


( Finally -after a week of writing boulders-)



3 comments:

  1. beautiful stone Teri... I think boulders are good too!!! (even mountains!)

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  2. Lovely, Teri! Sometimes less really is more...

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  3. This is a beautiful word picture. Very well done.

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